Sunday, September 26, 2010

Week 4 - Monday, 9/27/2010

Week 4 – Monday, 9/27/2010
  •      Roll
  •      Review Class Email Policy (it’s an extension of class, so it’s important you read it thoroughly)
  •      Re-Do of class email list
  •      Discuss class web sites – blog, e-handbook/Bedford/Raider Writer
  •      Discuss Class Readings Policy and Quizzes
  •     Chapter 4 Quiz
  •     BA 3 – Any questions?
  •     Review Chapter 4 in Textbook
  •    Thesis Statements Discussion and Activity: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/545/01/
  •    Look at Thesis Statement Examples (will be attached in email later, too)
  •    Thesis Statements for a Rhetorical Analysis
  •    Assign BA 4:
Brief Assignment 4: Developing Thesis Statements
Reading 4: Textbook Ch. 3 Thesis p. 83-92; E-Handbook Ch. 12h; 17a;

Objective: To develop new strategies for writing a thesis statement.

Purpose: One key to writing a successful essay is to develop a focused thesis statement. This assignment will enable you to do so.

 Description: For your draft 1.1, you will write a rhetorical analysis.  See the description of Draft 1.1 for a discussion of what a rhetorical analysis is and what you will be expected to do. 

 To create your thesis, you need to have the following: 1) one primary text that will serve as the object of your analysis, and 2) the results of your close reading of this text that you will use to formulate your thesis.

 To complete this assignment, compose three thesis statements that you might use in your draft 1.1.  You may write 3 statements which could be used in three different analytical papers, or try out different thesis statements for a single paper.

HW:
BA 4 and Readings - Due Friday by 11:59 p.m.

Monday, September 20, 2010

Week 3 Follow-Up Email Text

Hello all,
Thank you for your attention and participation in class today. I’m writing (as usual) to review some key points, direct you to some very important supplementary information (which will help you to be successful in completing the homework assignment for this week), review homework assignments, and, of course, start a dialogue for any questions you may have. This information is also posted on our course blog.
Before I get to the key points, let me mention that I have attached the comma rules review I mentioned in class and the “Reading for Meaning” worksheet we used in conjunction with the “helicopter parents” article. The comma review sheet is for you to review independently. The “Reading for Meaning” worksheet -- alongside with your notes from class and Chapter 2 in your text book – will help you to generate evaluative writing in order to successfully complete Brief Assignment 3.
Key Points Review:
·       An evaluation of a text moves beyond summary and provides a critique.
·       A critique should summarize the article, identify rhetorical aspects like purpose, topic, issues, conclusions, tone, etc., and broadly answer questions such as “to what extent does the author succeed in his or her purpose” and “to what extent do you agree with the author?”
·       Sometimes, a text will have multiple purposes, but you can usually identify a main purpose for evaluation purposes.
·       Become a master of critical reading: annotate, underline, and respond critically to points as you read.
·       Ethos, pathos, and logos are often employed in persuasive texts – ask yourself how the author is attempting to persuade you as a reader, and whether or not the correlations being made from the attempt are valid (or not).
·       Sometimes, ethos, pathos, and logos are used in conjunction with one another.
·       Always think about what type of audience an article is being written for – does the author make assumptions about that audience? If so, are they always true?
·       To quote from your textbook: “Your task in writing this evaluation (Brief Assignment 3) is to turn your critical reading of the chosen article into a systematic evaluation in order to deepen you reader’s (and your own) understanding of the article. Among other things (which means any and all items discussed about article evaluation in class today), you’re interested in determining: what and author says, how well the points are made, what assumptions underlie the argument, what issues may have been overlooked, and what implications can be drawn from such an analysis. Remember that you can’t simply say ‘I liked it’ or ‘the article didn’t meet its intended purpose’ – you should be concerned with specifically HOW and WHY each of the strategies/techniques/pieces of evidence employed in your article do or do not work.”
Important Supplementary Information
Before beginning Brief Assignment 3, (and in addition to the readings assigned in “Reading 3” below), please review in detail the following items in your textbook:
·       Chapter 2 as a whole – pay special attention to sections which detail how to answer the questions “to what extent does the author succeed in his or her purpose” and “to what extent do you agree with the author?” Also, once you determine your chosen article’s purpose, make sure to review the keys to evaluating the various purpose and employ the techniques suggested in the text (these can be found toward the beginning of the chapter).
·       Chapter 2, Pg. 63 – guidelines for writing critiques – this page provides a concise overview of possible organization and focus for your Brief Assignment 3. I’d highly advise using this as your guide (in correlation with the attached “Reading for Meaning” worksheet questions we went over in class). The basic model to follow here is: introduce, summarize, assess, respond, conclude. Please make sure you have an understanding of these terms before you begin writing.
·       Pgs. 655-656 – provides two real-life examples of Brief Assignment 3 for your review. Note that these examples not only give an introduction and summary of the article(s), but they also assess the presentation of the article (using the parameters given in Chapter 2, pg. 63 in particular, the topics covered on the “Reading for Meaning” worksheet, and other sources of basis for rhetorical evaluation and critique), respond to the presentation of the article, and conclude in a way which deems the article suitable (or unsuitable for further analysis).
Homework Review:
After reviewing the information above, please complete the following items by Friday, September 24, 2010 at 11:59 p.m.:
Brief Assignment 3: Critical Reading

Reading 3:
·       McWhorter, “Reading and Writing about Text” (available from E-Handbook site)
·       E-Handbook Ch. 2c
·       Ch. 9
·       Textbook Ch. 4 Rhetorical Analysis p. 101-130

Objective: To demonstrate your ability to read critically and to effectively evaluate an article as potential source material for a college-level analysis assignment.

Purpose: To gain practice in evaluating sources, you’ll read and evaluate one article from the list provided below or an article specified by your instructor. Use the Guidelines for Evaluating Sources in Ch. 14c and 14d of The St. Martin’s Handbook to assist you in your evaluation.

Description: This is a two-part assignment. To complete the first part, go to the e-handbook site, enter Prep-U, and take the quiz labeled “First Reading Quiz.”

To complete part two of this assignment, first include your reading quiz score at the beginning of your assignment. Then, write an evaluation of the text you have chosen from the following list:
- MacNeil, Robert. “Do you Speak American?”First-Year Writing: Writing in the Disciplines. Boston: Pearson Custom, 2010. 313-323.

- Bryson, Bill. “Good English and Bad.” First-Year Writing: Writing in the Disciplines. Boston: Pearson Custom, 2010. 330-338.

- Crystal, David. “Why a Global Language?” First-Year Writing: Writing in the Disciplines. Boston: Pearson Custom, 2010. 350-359.

Remember that you are looking at this text as if you were going to use it as your object of evaluation in your Draft 1.1. To that end, you’ll want to read carefully and pay particular attention to the rhetorical features of the text. Your evaluation should be approximately two paragraphs in length, or 400 – 500 words. Your audience for the evaluation is an individual whom you are trying to convince that the article you’re evaluating is a good one for the upcoming Draft 1.1 assignment. This means it would make sense to reference Draft 1.1 directly in your conclusion.
Any Questions?
As always, if you have any questions, I am here to help – please email me, visit my office hours, or schedule a time to discuss any concerns you might have. And, again, as usual, check the blog if you need direct links for anything.
Have a great week,
Erin Trauth

Sunday, September 19, 2010

Week 3/4 - Monday, Sept. 20, 2010

Class Activities:
• Roll

• Review BA 2 – Any Questions?

• Comma Review (in email, will go over next class)

• Introduction to Draft 1.1

Draft 1.1: Rhetorical Analysis
Reading 6: E-Handbook Ch. 3

Objective: To demonstrate your ability to rhetorically analyze texts.

Purpose: In the first half of the course, you have been honing your writing skills so as to prepare you for college level writing. You will use all of these skills, (summarizing, paraphrasing, critical reading, constructing thesis statements, and using supporting material via quotations) throughout your writing of this assignment.

Description: To complete this assignment, you will begin by selecting a text to analyze. You may either select an essay from Ch. 9 of your textbook, or another piece of writing from a scholarly journal, reputable newspaper or website. Your classroom instructor may also have suggestions for you as to appropriate texts to analyze. After selecting your text and critically reading it, you will determine the writer’s purpose and intended audience for the text.

Once you have determined these elements, you will begin to analyze the text so as to determine the specific strategies the writer uses to achieve his or her purpose and to meet the needs of the audience. For example, you might choose to look at such elements as the types of evidence a writer puts forward and how he or she does so. Ask yourself if the writer uses evidence from sources, or if he or she tells stories from personal experience. Examine the sentence structures and word choice. How do these contribute to the author’s purpose? Evaluate the overall tone of the text, and determine how it does or does not contribute to the way in which it communicates to its audience. After you determine what these strategies are, consider how well these strategies actually work. As a result of this assignment, you should be able to take these skills and transfer them to any reading you are asked to do in college, and you should see an improvement in your ability to read and comprehend any text.

Although this is an initial draft, it should be carefully edited and written in a professional tone. Please use MLA format for both your in-text citations and your works cited in this draft.

Your draft should be 1200 words in length.



• Discussion: The Importance of Critical Reading (Discuss Chapter 2 in textbook)
 - What can we evaluate in a rhetorical analysis?

 - Review PTIC
 - Discuss Rhetorical Analysis/PTIC, Ethos, Pathos, Logos, Rhetorical Strategies (using Chapter 2 in Textbook)
Ethos, Pathos, Logos:
http://www.rpi.edu/dept/llc/webclass/web/project1/group4/

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k5QE7KV6gQY
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ImAD8BOBOhw
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gq_EZjhHaDY


• Critical Reading Activity – “Helicopter Parents” Article:
http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/37493795
(Annotate as a class)

• Critical Reading – Annotate Rest of Article in Groups/Apply PTIC and Mini-Rhetorical Analysis:
1. Consider how these annotations aid in understanding the piece. If they’re not, what annotations would be helpful?
2. Categorize, as specifically as possible, the annotations.
3. What do the various annotations do?
4. Present findings to class.

• Assign BA 3 (Due Friday at 11:59 p.m.):
Brief Assignment 3: Critical Reading

Reading 3: McWhorter, “Reading and Writing about Text” (available from E-Handbook site); E-Handbook Ch. 2c; Ch. 9; Textbook Ch. 4 Rhetorical Analysis p. 101-130

Objective: To demonstrate your ability to read critically and to effectively evaluate an article as potential source material for a college-level analysis assignment.

Purpose: To gain practice in evaluating sources, you’ll read and evaluate one article from the list provided below or an article specified by your instructor. Use the Guidelines for Evaluating Sources in Ch. 14c and 14d of The St. Martin’s Handbook to assist you in your evaluation.

Description: This is a two-part assignment. To complete the first part, go to the e-handbook site, enter Prep-U, and take the quiz labeled “First Reading Quiz.”

To complete part two of this assignment, first include your reading quiz score at the beginning of your assignment. Then, write an evaluation of the text you have chosen from the following list:
- MacNeil, Robert. “Do you Speak American?”First-Year Writing: Writing in the Disciplines. Boston: Pearson Custom, 2010. 313-323.

- Bryson, Bill. “Good English and Bad.” First-Year Writing: Writing in the Disciplines. Boston: Pearson Custom, 2010. 330-338.

- Crystal, David. “Why a Global Language?” First-Year Writing: Writing in the Disciplines. Boston: Pearson Custom, 2010. 350-359.

Remember that you are looking at this text as if you were going to use it as your object of evaluation in your Draft 1.1. To that end, you’ll want to read carefully and pay particular attention to the rhetorical features of the text. Your evaluation should be approximately two paragraphs in length, or 400 – 500 words. Your audience for the evaluation is an individual whom you are trying to convince that the article you’re evaluating is a good one for the upcoming Draft 1.1 assignment.

• Look at samples of BA 3

Homework:
• BA3 (Reading Quiz 1, Rest of Assignment Listed Above)
• BA3 Readings (Reading 3: McWhorter, “Reading and Writing about Text” (available from E-Handbook site); E-Handbook Ch. 2c; Ch. 9; Textbook Ch. 4 Rhetorical Analysis p. 101-130)
• Review "Top Twenty" and "Comma Rules"

Sunday, September 12, 2010

Week 2/3 - Monday, 9/13/2010


Monday, 9/13/2010 - Class

  • Review blog post/email sent this week

  • Student emails (confirm) and discuss email policy (format and responsibility to check)



  • Questions about Course policies?

  • Questions about BA 1?

  • Review Top Twenty

  • Intro to Summary and Paraphrase

-          Why we’re learning this
-          Activity

  • Assign BA 2:

Brief Assignment 2: Summary and Paraphrase
Reading 2: Textbook Ch. 1 Summary and Paraphrase p. 5-32; E-Handbook Ch. 1 & 2; 14 f(2) & (3); DiYanni, “Developing a College Vocabulary” (available from the E-Handbook website)

Objective: To demonstrate your ability to summarize and paraphrase portions of a text.
Purpose: Summarizing and paraphrasing are important skills for academic writers. For this assignment, you will write both a summary and a paraphrase of a text. Use the discussion about summaries in Ch. 1 of your textbook as well as the discussion of paraphrase in Ch. 1 and Chapter 14 of The St. Martin’s Handbook to assist you in doing so.

Description: Part One, Article Summary

The following three articles are located in Ch. 9 of your textbook. To complete your article summary, select one of the articles from the list below OR use a different article chosen by your classroom instructor. Your summary of an article should follow the summary writing guidelines discussed in Ch. 1.

Articles to summarize:

-        MacNeil, Robert. “Do you Speak American?”First-Year Writing: Writing in the Disciplines. Boston: Pearson Custom, 2010. 313-323.

-        Bryson, Bill. “Good English and Bad.” First-Year Writing: Writing in the Disciplines. Boston: Pearson Custom, 2010. 330-338.

-        Crystal, David. “Why a Global Language?” First-Year Writing: Writing in the Disciplines. Boston: Pearson Custom, 2010. 350-359.



Description, Part Two, Paraphrase Assignment

After you’ve completed your summary, you will paraphrase a brief but complex passage from the same text. For the "paraphrase" part of the assignment, you will only need to paraphrase a passage of your chosen article. As opposed to paraphrasing the whole article, please choose any passage (one large paragraph), identify the page number and paragraph number of the original passage (i.e. p. 474, paragraph 1) above your paraphrase, and write a short paraphrase for that passage only.

However, your assignment should provide a summary of the entire article for the summary part of the assignment. Please let me know if this makes sense. I am making this change to make for a bit less work this week, as you do have a lot of reading.

In summation, your summary should summarize the entire text. Your paraphrase should paraphrase only one passage within the original article (again, make sure you indicate which one you're paraphrasing at the top).
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Homework:

  • BA 2 (due Friday by 11:59 p.m.)




Read and print Helicopter Parents-  http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/37493795

  • Read Chapter 2 in textbook (Critical Reading and Critique)

Tuesday, September 7, 2010

Follow up and To Do Before Class on 9/13/2010

Hello all,


Hope you had a fun and restful Labor Day weekend. Also, thank you for completing your Brief Assignment One -- all of those who turned in work will receive feedback and grades over the next week via Raider Writer.

Now, moving forward ... although we did not meet this week, we will need to complete some reading for the course for discussion next class (Monday, 9/13/2010).

To make this simple, I’m going to simply list below what you should have done from last week (what would have been due if we had had class this week on Monday, 9/6/2010) and then what you should have prepared for class discussion on Monday, 9/13/2010. You will need to have all of this completed by our next class meeting. Please bring all books and materials to class on Monday, 9/13/2010:

For Week 2 (if we had met for class on Monday, 9/6/2010; all of this should have done last week and of course, then, should be completed by class time Monday, 9/13/2010):

By now, you should have:

• Purchased your textbook (“First Year Writing”)

• Logged into Bedford Student Center and completed the pre-semester diagnostic

• Completed Brief Assignment number one and uploaded to Raider Writer

• Read the “Course Policies” in your “First Year Writing” textbook

• Read the Bedford “Top Twenty” on the E-Handbook Site

TO DO THIS WEEK - For Week 3 (complete/read by class time on Monday, 9/13/2010):


• Read in Textbook - Ch. 1 Summary and Paraphrase p. 5-32


• Read E-Handbook Ch. 1 & 2; 14 f(2) & (3) (ON BEDFORD E-HANDBOOK SITE)


• Read DiYanni “Developing a College Vocabulary” (available from the BEDFORD E-HANDBOOK website – INSTRUCTION/CODE FOR ACCESSING THIS INFORMATION IS ATTACHED HERE: HOW TO LOCATE READINGS FOR WEEK 2/3 in BEDFORD AND POSTED ON HTTP://TRAUTHWRITING.BLOGSPOT.COM

Again, in order to be prepared for our next class, you’ll need to complete the items above and bring all materials to class. If you have any questions, please email me or consult a classmate. Please make sure to read through ALL attached material before emailing to ask for codes, etc. I am also available for office hours this week on Thursday from 2:15 – 3:15 p.m. in ENGL 424.

Thanks, and see you all next week (Monday, 9/13/2010).

- E. Trauth