Sunday, October 31, 2010

Week 8/9 - Monday, Nov. 1

1. Roll
2. Critiques - any questions?
3. Your Writing Process - Freewrite
3. Global Revision
4. 
Brief Assignment 6: Global Revision
Reading 8: E-Handbook Ch. 6a; 6c-f; g-j; Ch. 7;  Ch. 17f; Ch. 26, 27 & 29

Objective: To develop the ability to determine what revisions should be made to an early draft of a document.

Purpose: Most inexperienced writers have trouble identifying, prioritizing, and executing appropriate large scale revisions to a draft. In this assignment, you’ll read both an initial draft and a subsequently revised version of this draft, evaluate the changes made, and make suggestions as to what else might be revised.

Description: To complete this assignment, read the initial draft provided and then write an initial paragraph in which you discuss the problems that you see in the current draft. Next, read the revised draft and write another paragraph in which you discuss 1) whether the problems that you saw in the first draft were addressed, 2) whether the revisions fixed other issues that you hadn’t noticed in the draft, and 3) why the revisions are or are not an improvement over the first draft. If you believe other revisions should be made to the draft, conclude your assignment with an explanation of what those are and how the revisions should be made.

HW:
1. BA 6
2. Study E-Handbook Top 20 and E-Handbook Ch. 6a; 6c-f; g-j; Ch. 7;  Ch. 17f; Ch. 26, 27 & 29

Sunday, October 24, 2010

Monday, October 25, 2010

1.       Roll
2.       Draft 1.1 – Any Questions?
3.       Peer Review Commenting Powerpoint
4.       Grammar

·         Peer Critiques
Reading 6: E-Handbook Ch. 3
Objective: To demonstrate your ability to write a critique based on a primary source (a peer's essay).
Purpose: Having others read your writing is a good way to find out if your document is reaching its intended audience. In this assignment, you will read the drafts of two of your peers and write a critique of each.
Description: To complete this assignment, use the guidelines on p. 63 of your textbook and compose a critique of your peers’ drafts. For each critique, you will introduce the draft, summarize its main points, assess and respond to the author's presentation, and offer conclusions about the effectiveness of the analysis. Remember to speak as specifically as possible about the draft, quoting from it when necessary. Your critique will be 400 - 500 words in length.
The elements of the draft you should address include:
•Text for analysis/Thesis: Identify the writer's thesis and then evaluate it for effectiveness. Determine whether the writer has selected a particular text to analyze and whether or not the thesis indicates that the writer will complete a rhetorical analysis of the text. Discuss whether the thesis is specific enough and of appropriate scope for this analysis. Explain why or why not, and provide suggestions for the writer to help improve the thesis, if necessary.
•Quality and Specificity of Analysis: Evaluate the writer’s analysis. Does the writer select specific rhetorical elements of the text to discuss? What are these elements, and what does the writer have to say about them? Does the writer seem to effectively analyze, or does the draft read more as a summary or paraphrasing of parts of the text being analyzed, or does the writer end up arguing about the content, rather than the structure and presentation of the text?
•Overall Essay Structure: Comment on the overall structure of the essay. For example, explain in detail whether or not the paragraphs are presented in a logical and persuasive way. Does the writer provide a clear introduction, body and conclusion? Does each paragraph begin with a clear topic sentence and transition into the next paragraph? Provide examples that are particularly effective or areas that need more improvement.
·         Rubric Application
C1:  Focus

Does the student thoroughly explore the quality and specificity of the draft being examined in the critique?

C3:  Sources and Evidence
Does the student support his or her critique with evidence from the text? In other words, does the student directly refer to specific parts of the text (paragraphs and/or sentences).  This criterion is particularly important because students tend to use vague and generic language that could apply to any draft.
C5: Own Perspective
Does the student show authority in relaying his or her perspective about the effectiveness of the text? Students tend to shy away from making a direct critique of a document, or they default to praising the document in some generic way.
C6: Conclusion
Does the student provide an accurate evaluative statement about the draft's overall effectiveness?  Does the student discuss the significance of the problems he or she identifies in the draft (i.e., how important each of these problems are)?
C7: Communication
Does the student communicate his or her critique effectively?  Is the student's tone professional?  Has the student organized his or her critique effectively?  Is the critique relatively free of grammatical errors?
·         Review Examples of Peer Critiques

Sunday, October 17, 2010

Week 6/7 – Monday, Oct. 18, 2010

Week 6/7 – Monday, Oct. 18, 2010
1.       Roll/Review Office Hours and Location
2.       Discuss HW Assignment Due Friday
3.       Discuss Midterm Grades and Grading Weights for 1301
4.       Grammar: “Like” vs. “As” http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/like-versus-as.aspx and Semi-Colons http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/semicolons.aspx
5.       Go over Draft 1.1 Assignment
Draft 1.1: Rhetorical Analysis
Reading 6: E-Handbook Ch. 3
Objective: To demonstrate your ability to rhetorically analyze texts.
Purpose: In the first half of the course, you have been honing your writing skills so as to prepare you for college level writing. You will use all of these skills, (summarizing, paraphrasing, critical reading, constructing thesis statements, and using supporting material via quotations) throughout your writing of this assignment.
Description:  After critically reading your text, you will determine the writer’s purpose and intended audience.
Once you have determined these elements, you will begin to analyze the text so as to determine the specific strategies the writer uses to achieve his or her purpose and to meet the needs of the audience. For example, you might choose to look at such elements as the types of evidence a writer puts forward and how he or she does so. Ask yourself if the writer uses evidence from sources, or if he or she tells stories from personal experience. Examine the sentence structures and word choice. How do these contribute to the author’s purpose? Evaluate the overall tone of the text, and determine how it does or does not contribute to the way in which it communicates to its audience. After you determine what these strategies are, consider how well these strategies actually work. As a result of this assignment, you should be able to take these skills and transfer them to any reading you are asked to do in college, and you should see an improvement in your ability to read and comprehend any text.
Although this is an initial draft, it should be carefully edited and written in a professional tone. Please use MLA format for both your in-text citations and your works cited in this draft.
Your draft should be 1200 words in length.
6.       Go over rubric  parameters for Draft 1.1
For draft 1.1, six of the criteria listed on the critical thinking rubric: 1, 2, 3, 5, 6, and 7 will be applied:



Issue Identification and Focus

The student’s understanding of what a rhetorical analysis is should be the basis for this evaluation. The degree to which the student exhibits that understanding will determine what score is assigned.

Context and Assumptions

The student should demonstrate an understanding of the context in which the artifact being analyzed was written. That is, if the student doesn’t understand the purpose of the text in the first place, it will be difficult to write an analysis of it.

Sources and Evidence

Critical criterion here—consider the choice of quotations, balance of quotations used to identify v. quotations to analyze original author’s choices.

 Own Perspective

The thesis will be the primary point of focus for determining this score. Specificity, accuracy, and overall understanding will be primary. Also, does the remainder of the draft indicate that the writer understood what he/she said in the thesis?

 Conclusion

What conclusions does the writer draw about the effectiveness of the writer’s choices and of the resulting text overall? How specific and accurate are these?

Communication

Organization is the first thing I’d look at here—if the organization is poor, even if sentence level matters are adequate to good, the score will reflect that.

7.       Look at Draft 1.1 Examples
8.       Peer Review of Draft 1.1 Ideas and Drafts in Groups of two
9.       Draft 1.1 Question/Answer – 5 minutes
HW: Draft 1.1 Due Friday at 11:59 p.m.

Monday, October 4, 2010

Week 5 - Monday, October 4, 2010

·         Roll
·         Review Thesis Chapter
·         Questions on BA4? Remember, a thesis statement is not just a summary statement.
·         Rhetorical Devices Overview – 13 groups
·         Evaluating and Integrating Quotations (your rhetorical analysis will have several examples of textual evidence).
·         Look at examples of BA5
·         Group work: group by article, choose one quote to integrate –
3 groups – one sub-group finds ethos, one finds logos, one finds pathos, one finds examples of rhetorical devices, one finds organizational devices, one finds repetition.
·         St. Martin's Handbook. Chapter 15 is a great resource for this assignment.
·         Discuss BA 5:
Brief Assignment 5: Integrating and Evaluating Quotations
Reading 5: Textbook Ch. 1 Quotations p. 32-44; E-Handbook Ch. 15
Objective: To identify and evaluate quotations for use in your analysis essay.
Purpose:  Quotations pose several challenges for writers. The purpose of this assignment is for you to select quotations from sources you plan to use in your analysis essay, evaluate their usefulness, and discuss how and where you might use these in your upcoming draft.
Description:  Begin by writing your working thesis at the top of your assignment. Then, select a certain number of quotations (between 5 - 7) from the article that you plan to analyze in your draft. Write a brief assessment of why each quotation would be useful to you in composing your draft.  Your assessment of each quotation should include your answers to the following questions:
·         Where will this quotation fit in your organization?
·         How does it further and/or support your analysis?
·         Will you use it as a quotation or paraphrase the selection, and why?
NOTE: You may find that in identifying and evaluating your quotations, you modify your original thesis statement.